Heart Illusions

Heart Illusions

I saw you today.
My heart stopped.
My breath silent.

I saw you today.  
For a moment
I was whole.

I thought I saw you today.
But it cannot be
you are no longer here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Loveless Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 6:30 AM
Oh....this is really pretty. i definitely understand. ~Rain
Bono Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 10:25 AM
So true.nice job.I posted lyrics to a song called temporary home.If you get a chance take a look.
Dufresne Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 5:36 PM
here I is ! ..here I is !!! :)......Love ya -Robert
Bono Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 2:44 PM
awesome job.I like it.Hope all is well with you and have a Happy Easter.
Brown Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 10:08 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jeralynn. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Cheeseman Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 3:53 AM
Touching write Jeralyn from the heart thoughts are with you Daniel
Haick Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 6:34 PM
Dear Jeralynn, A bit of sadness touched you that day, but tomorrow did come! Peace, always, audrey
Culverhouse Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 3:53 PM
so sad, hope you are well. enjoyed reading today, tears are falling.
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