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Heart Hidden In Daisy

The petals unfurl at the touch of dawn like the eyes of the day dreamy, as the southern zephyr ripples in my lawn I see the dance of daisy. The flowers bloom in silence, look up at the arc of the sun, soaking its purity as the essence into heavenly beauty they turn. As the night melts in sunburst horizon and the morning haze clears, on my jade meadow I descry the sky of emerald is full of stars. Divine glow pulsates in floral cadence, succors weary mind with enthralling grace, enshrined in the patina of innocence like the placid petals of your face. Pining for your elusive embrace with flower of my garden I’ll make a posy, in your alluring vase I’ll place my heart hidden in daisy.
October 29, 2019 Brian Strand Contest A Strand (1066)

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Date: 12/22/2019 3:20:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Subimal
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Date: 12/22/2019 2:50:00 PM
Beautiful win my friend!;) congrats!;)
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Date: 11/3/2019 1:29:00 PM
Subimal congratulations on your honorable mention in my writing challenge with this lovely poem. It would have placed higher but I found the rhyming was off on a few lines but it is still a great poem!
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Date: 11/1/2019 6:27:00 PM
a pretty poem and lovely tribute to the daisy, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/1/2019 2:36:00 PM
- Flowers are beautiful although some are called weeds ... this would be a contest that would have been difficult to judge - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Subimal :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2019 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Subimal :)
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Date: 11/1/2019 9:12:00 AM
Congrats on your placement!;)
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