Heart Fuel

Opening up 
with a moon smiling tonight
sparkling stars mingling with white clouds 
Searching for the soul's dream
stands a wonder before thee very eyes 
flaming hot vision

The one whom sparks electric
who will forever and always burn 
softly inside out 
a candle sweet aroma scenting blossoms 
whispering fragrance off beauty

Silver echoes deeply 
within precious silent 
soft humming whispers 
sweet singing to a rose
blowing warm petal fingers soft inside waves
who will always sweep 
sweetly across the ocean 
Touching deepest sands 
warmly we hold hands
Living in the land of eternal youth 
always pure free as the driven snow 

Dewdrops shines 
in your sunlight rising 
Sparkling beautiful forever
smiling a little something 
wrapped up inside just for you
pulling on the strings warmly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hicks Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 5:50 PM
You correlate the imagery of nature with the deep feelings you have for your loved one as if they are one in the same - you have a unique style my friend!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 6:18 PM
they are one and the same timothy in every vision in the mind love remains powerful thank you kindly dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Nickle Read Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 8:07 PM
Your words wake up Heart's slumber with the soul's true voice.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 8:12 PM
david thank you deeply heartfelt beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Lamoureux Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Sounds divine Liam! You have skills my friend.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 10:13 AM
every thing to do with love these days richard draws divine in my eyes never will i ever try to see that other side dazzling comment dear friend bless you pal sending you a big smile
Smith Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 7:50 AM
To live in the land of eternal youth...amazing
Mcdaid Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 10:08 AM
yeah tim so pure free and loving smiling thank you pal for the truly dazzling comment thank you kindly dear friend
Chircop Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 5:13 AM
Liam.. 'a candle sweet aroma scenting blossoms/shislering fragrances of beauty'..Beautiful !! Dewdrops shine in. your sunlight rising!!Beautiful!! a favourite : )
Mcdaid Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 10:05 AM
smiling wonderful comment charmaine dear friend thank you so kindly heartfelt appreciated bless you pal
Duggan Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 1:45 AM
Beautiful verse Liam, Love each and every sentence all put together to make that even flow, what a beautiful read, take care my friend..........Vera..........
Mcdaid Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 10:00 AM
vera dear friend always a delight seeing you passing you and peter a smile thank you warmly deeply appreciated bless you
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