Heart Broken

you what can i say you stole my heart and I thought you loved me and for a while you did 
but it was a dam lie. You have crushed what was left of my already broken heart what more 
could you do. I will never love again for my heart is in no shape to love my life is over. I 
have never loved someone like I loved you and still you played with my heart and for what 
did you get some enjoyment from hurting me because you did it. What is the point in my life 
now you took that when you look my heart what else are you going to take what ever it is 
could not hurt any more than you already have.i will never forgive what you have done and 
I hope this happens to you one day so you can feel what you have done to me. I just want 
you to know I hate you and you can not hurt me any more for I am broken so thanks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/2/2009 4:28:00 AM
I have read your poem this morning and it would be interesting to know what form of poetry you intend it to be Dylan. Sad write. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2009 4:02:00 PM
Good riddance right. Sara
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