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Heart Broken

It seemed as if the air was sucked out of my lungs, my breathe in tatters I heard my heart break into a million pieces The sound of it shook out my tears Like shards of glass falling, each memory etched in every drop that fell out of love Can I ever revive those butterflies that fluttered each time you were close? All of those nights of stars and dreams Can I ever hold a hand in trust? Walk away if you must, loneliness steadily chisels away at my soul as I exist A scar where my heart was, and a tattoo on my wrist! One more heart broken, as you add it to your list! 11.10.22

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Gary Radice

Date: 10/13/2022 11:57:00 AM

Carol, I can only echo the comments of the ladies below. A real and heartfelt poem. I really like your shards of glass imagery and association that you use - it adds an extra dimension to your words and highlights the pain of lost love as do the questions you ask. You may feel empty and even neglected but that will pass. You can certainly write moving poetry. Cheers - Gary

Carol Mitra
Date: 10/13/2022 11:35:00 PM

Thank you dear Gary....I am glad it touched a cord.... Heartbreak is felt deeply by all :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2022 10:24:00 AM

I can feel the pain within these lines. Sad that some people don't have the ability to be monogamous or to truly love another person. Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Carol Mitra
Date: 10/12/2022 11:15:00 PM

Thank you dear Sara.... I am with you on this one.... Much love :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/12/2022 10:01:00 AM

Oh Carol, your imagery of grief is so vibrant and imaginative - "a scar where my heart was." And I really like the questions about your ability to love again in the future. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, prayers and a hug.

Carol Mitra
Date: 10/12/2022 11:14:00 PM

Hope your doing good Sam....Your comments truly are uplifting and Thank you :)