Carol Mitra Poet Free verse

Heart Broken

It seemed as if the air was sucked 
out of my lungs, my breathe in tatters
I heard my heart break into a million pieces
The sound of it shook out my tears
Like shards of glass falling, each memory
etched in every drop that fell out of love
Can I ever revive those butterflies that fluttered
each time you were close? 
All of those nights of stars and dreams
Can I ever hold a hand in trust? 
Walk away if you must, loneliness steadily 
chisels away at my soul as I exist
A scar where my heart was, and a tattoo on my wrist! 
One more heart broken, as you add it to your list! 
11.10.22

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Gary Radice October 13, 2022 at 11:57 AM Carol, I can only echo the comments of the ladies below. A real and heartfelt poem. I really like your shards of glass imagery and association that you use - it adds an extra dimension to your words and highlights the pain of lost love as do the questions you ask. You may feel empty and even neglected but that will pass. You can certainly write moving poetry. Cheers - Gary Carol Mitra October 13, 2022 at 11:35 PM Thank you dear Gary....I am glad it touched a cord.... Heartbreak is felt deeply by all :)

Sara Kendrick October 12, 2022 at 10:24 AM I can feel the pain within these lines. Sad that some people don't have the ability to be monogamous or to truly love another person. Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara Carol Mitra October 12, 2022 at 11:15 PM Thank you dear Sara.... I am with you on this one.... Much love :)

Sam Kauffman October 12, 2022 at 10:01 AM Oh Carol, your imagery of grief is so vibrant and imaginative - "a scar where my heart was." And I really like the questions about your ability to love again in the future. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, prayers and a hug. Carol Mitra October 12, 2022 at 11:14 PM Hope your doing good Sam....Your comments truly are uplifting and Thank you :)