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Heart Broken

For all my life my heart has been beaten and battered,
But now im afraid the peices have scattered

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P Sheart

Date: 10/4/2009 1:37:00 PM

Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty

Date: 9/26/2009 4:58:00 PM

Just wanted to drop in and add to my other comment--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 12:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 9/5/2009 8:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2009 4:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your Couplet being featured this week. Sara

Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/2/2009 1:52:00 PM

Such a simple poem with so much power! Congratulations, this deserved to be featured! By the way, I'm a little bit anal when it comes to spelling; but, you spelled "pieces" wrong. The "i" comes before the"e".

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 9/2/2009 12:38:00 PM

This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great ! Adeleke

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 9/2/2009 12:38:00 PM

Cesar Cantu

Date: 9/2/2009 7:06:00 AM

Wow...that's painfull....real pain...yet, that means someone has a lot of work to do; adventures are awsome, specialy those that may drag such personal significance within =Dthanks for sharing, good luck

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/1/2009 6:50:00 AM

Congratulations, Walter, on having your well-written couplet featured this week. It enlivens the mind with truth. Battering causes scattering. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/1/2009 2:28:00 AM

Walker, congratulations on your feature this week...Raul

Date: 8/31/2009 5:19:00 PM

So much truth shared about the lasting effects of abuse captured in just two lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/31/2009 4:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Walker. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol

Cherica Eckiwaudah

Date: 7/21/2009 12:09:00 PM

nicel poem! always, cherica lynn <3

Amanda Madden

Date: 5/5/2009 7:07:00 AM

Very touching...keep up the good work

Date: 4/28/2009 1:25:00 PM

It's a tragedy that so many people go through this. Picking up the pieces isn't easy. I see you haven't been at The Soup long. Welcome! You mentioned that you are just beginning to write poetry. We all start somewhere--I'm still much of a rookie myself. Reading others and writing helps in that writing journey. Best wishes to you. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

S. Michael Fuller

Date: 4/21/2009 8:27:00 AM

torn and tattered we all may be, drifting, searching, up the tree. Your writing is great Walker. Just keep it up.

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/17/2009 2:24:00 PM

Beautiful writing. You express emotion so well. This is a sad write but your talent shines brightly through each word. Well done! Welcome to Poetry Soup! Smiles from Lolita

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/17/2009 1:42:00 AM

I don't think it's too late to pull it together. With a little hope, one can go a long way. I hope things get better for you...Raul

Raven Carr

Date: 4/16/2009 11:22:00 AM

touching poem walker!!!i didn't know you wrote poems so good!!!!!!!!! one of your best buddies wrote this:-)

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/6/2009 8:31:00 AM

Love is a broom that sweeps things together Walk with me, it does get better. Lots of love