Heart Broken

Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty

Just wanted to drop in and add to my other comment--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

Congratulations on your Couplet being featured this week. Sara

Such a simple poem with so much power! Congratulations, this deserved to be featured! By the way, I'm a little bit anal when it comes to spelling; but, you spelled "pieces" wrong. The "i" comes before the"e".

This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great ! Adeleke

This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great ! Adeleke

Wow...that's painfull....real pain...yet, that means someone has a lot of work to do; adventures are awsome, specialy those that may drag such personal significance within =Dthanks for sharing, good luck

Congratulations, Walter, on having your well-written couplet featured this week. It enlivens the mind with truth. Battering causes scattering. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane

Walker, congratulations on your feature this week...Raul

So much truth shared about the lasting effects of abuse captured in just two lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Walker. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol

nicel poem! always, cherica lynn <3

Very touching...keep up the good work

It's a tragedy that so many people go through this. Picking up the pieces isn't easy. I see you haven't been at The Soup long. Welcome! You mentioned that you are just beginning to write poetry. We all start somewhere--I'm still much of a rookie myself. Reading others and writing helps in that writing journey. Best wishes to you. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

torn and tattered we all may be, drifting, searching, up the tree. Your writing is great Walker. Just keep it up.

Beautiful writing. You express emotion so well. This is a sad write but your talent shines brightly through each word. Well done! Welcome to Poetry Soup! Smiles from Lolita

I don't think it's too late to pull it together. With a little hope, one can go a long way. I hope things get better for you...Raul

touching poem walker!!!i didn't know you wrote poems so good!!!!!!!!! one of your best buddies wrote this:-)

Love is a broom that sweeps things together Walk with me, it does get better. Lots of love

to the point big daddy! short but heartfelt!

Interesting short rhyme. full of emotion, to the point, good work. Judy Riley