Heart Attack

This Morning,  I opened our bedroom’s door 
 to tell you that my heart was hurting and I was alarmed . 

You looked at me with a frowned expression and said: - can you just close my door , I need to try this new coat alone. -
I said : - sorry -
and slowly closed the door 

You just made my heart hurt even more than before.
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February 25, 2026 at 6:53 PM
Thank you Camila for sharing. I love the way explain this short verse within your poem. Keep up the good work.
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