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Heart and Wisdom of Olympus

 
I flew to Olympus, to find its heart armor intact against Hades' dark wrath. At birth the power of light made its start as Homer's ghost sent me upon my path! Yet there I found only an empty throne where once Zeus in glory firmly reigned. So sad! For no lighted wisdom was shown. Such that grievous and blue, my heart was pained! The pain and the sorrow! Where was the heart? I fell to my knees beseeching the Gods. Supreme and great Zeus why did you depart? Perhaps it was the Titans, the elder gods. Then, Callioppe came for her father, And Themis, the divine man was bidden, Saying, Zeus gave his heart to his lover. Seeker be still, wisdom I have hidden! _________________________ November 29, 2015 Rhyme Collaboration - Robert Lindley and Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/3/2015 9:28:00 AM
A second collaboration with Robert. Very nice to both of you.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/3/2015 3:10:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting, this is actually the first collaboration with Robert, he is such a wonderful poet and a pleasure to write with ~
Date: 12/1/2015 12:32:00 PM
I'm reading this poem for the second time, having seen it on Robert's page. It's only fair that I echo the comment that I wrote on his:) ~ Full marks for another inspired collaboration! Broken Wings is a most capable writer; together you have done a great job; mythology is a favourite topic of mine and this poem does it credit. #7 All the best. // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 12/3/2015 3:12:00 PM
Paul, thanks for the lovely comment, Robert is a fine poet and it was awesome writing with such talent. I love mythology also, we do not get much chance to write on that subject here and thanks for the 7!!
Date: 11/30/2015 10:55:00 AM
Amazing. SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2015 10:59:00 AM
Skat thanks for the visit
Date: 11/29/2015 5:32:00 PM
So glad my friend, that you also presented our collaboration on your page! As noted before, your verses added were magnificent and it truly was a great pleasure writing with you! Love the pic and formatting as well. A7 PM ON THE WAY.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2015 6:12:00 PM
Robert, I think our poem is beautiful
Date: 11/29/2015 2:59:00 PM
A fabulous collaboration - beautifully penned Constance and Robert:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2015 4:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan ~
Date: 11/29/2015 2:06:00 PM
Fabulous collaboration Constance and Robert. Very well done.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2015 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Tim, it really was a lot of fun writing with another poet, I have always hesitated but so happy I did it ~
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