Heart Adrift

Left my heart twirling;
whorling  in the whirlpool.

Sweethearts a-hanging,
thumbs a-banging sugarplums.

My hair rapunzeling, enraptured,
captured by fairytale-pirating.

My heart as red as an apple,
shining from wax, waxing upon

the sugar-moon, crystalline
catastrophe of high-cheek crimson.

Heart, pleasingly plump, round
in the palm of the beholder.

Bereaving the helplessly bound
breath and palpitations; no rest.

The song of the ages; sages
are mad with platinum platitudes.

Drifting, my soul cascading;
spelunking into recesses

of caverns, cold, distant;
teeny feet fettered, forlorn.

Ferocious waters, funny waters
hold onto the beating with vines.

How divine to let go; let the rapids
take me real slow, circulating 

through arteries and veins;
throbbing with sobbing, regress.

Peachy, unpretentious, potent,
progressing to the end of the ride;

calm waters preaching, teal grass
with its daisy chains reaching,

holding me fast in gracious arms,
drying moon-eyes, sagacious.

My heart never needs to lie;
Sincerity is paradisaically prosaic.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 7:31 PM
Kim, you made my heart hurt but did it good- I feel in this something is not quite settled as it may seem, such BEAUTIFUL writing, Kim, hug
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:53 PM
Sometimes we just need a good cry ❤️‍🩹
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 4:38 PM
the last two lines are awesome....applause!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 7:13 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Delegans Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 11:57 AM
Some great expressions in this, Kim. I really enjoyed your unique and descriptive imagery.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 2:18 PM
Thanks, Chris!
Smith  Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 11:53 PM
You have it all in this whimsical write.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 3:18 AM
Thank you, Alison!
Poet Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 11:49 AM
From the "whorling in the whirlpool" to the depths of the imagination, where serene waters and flower garlands ultimately triumphed, the poem took a winding path, which I found so appealing. Kim. Great POEM
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 12:02 PM
Oh you do my heart good, dear poet! Thank you!
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 11:24 AM
Hello Kim :-) Very lovely write! The last lines are great! Blessings dear lovely poetess ~ AA
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 11:37 AM
Thank you AA! hugs
Rodgers Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 10:22 AM
Dear Kim, I loved the wild, inventive energy that surges through your muse. Such an intoxicating mix of whimsical fairytale tropes and raw, visceral emotion. I enjoyed the arc of the poem's motion, how the chaotic frenzy of "whorling in the whirlpool" cascades down into the subterranean recesses of the mind, only to finally yield to the calm waters and daisy chains. Kim, what a lush, rhythmic, and wonderfully kinetic poem! Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 11:37 AM
Wow, you are always good for my soul…thank you, Daniel!
Kendrick Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 9:17 AM
Very descriptive lines, but I am not sure what I should take away from this one. Maybe with God's help we can be some of those things in the last few stanzas. My heart feels drained at the moment. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 11:39 AM
Just raw thoughts that pour out…pick out those ones that speak to you…in the end Psalm 23 speaks with its calm waters and grass. Hugs 🙏
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