Heart

Heart you are the destroyer Heart you’re a killer Why are you doing this to me? Why don’t you do your functions? Stop to interfere with my other organs? You are making a festival of diseases to my body While you are incurable You’re exposing me to high blood pressure It requires a hypothetically proven cardiologist to operate you Every time when I see something of beauty you intrude my mind You’re making wrong decisions for me You’re purpose is to pump blood and Is to remove the waste products that I don’t need Not to see outcomes of a decision before you commit them Now I am friendless because of your companion jealousy People asks themselves what can pass through me without an attempt My friends think that I am a copy cat because of you A stone is sufficient to be your replacement if you were not my life support organ Heart Stop intrusions and let my mind make decisions for me

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 6:02:00 PM

Sello, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/26/2014 8:18:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Sello. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Kika Ayala

Date: 7/26/2014 4:04:00 PM

Beautiful, powerful, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.

Sello Matsepe
Date: 7/26/2014 4:47:00 PM

Thanks, Thanks, and thanks again you are not aware how much these words means to me, God Bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2014 9:27:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sello :) - I choose your first great written poem - Powerfull - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sello Matsepe
Date: 7/26/2014 4:38:00 PM

Anne thanks you make me feel so grateful and keen to express my abilities beyond the limits. thanks again for enlight to plead before rule 1

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/25/2014 8:58:00 PM

Sello,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sello Matsepe
Date: 7/26/2014 1:44:00 AM

Destroyer...well thanks for the warm welcome and courage you give, i really appreciate it and again i am glad to be a memeber of these community. By the way i am your follower, God bless you