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Hearing That Heartbeat

Hearing that heartbeat Felt shivers from tip to toe Each kick so welcome Weaving dreams for my unborn A mother making process

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/14/2013 4:08:00 PM
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Great work expressing the joys and excitement of the expectant mother..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by my work..Your comments were encouraging..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2013 2:09:00 AM
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I never thought of a child making a mother, very cool concept. On the day of your child's Birth it would be like you are both Born together.
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 1/6/2013 3:13:00 AM
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yes Richard...i hv experienced this process when i had my first baby...all thru the pregnancy ,i wondered wt it is to be a mother...read my poem 'Motherhood' and u will understand my journey into motherhood....:)
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/5/2013 7:47:00 AM
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Beautiful Irfana if its a true event let me know xx
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 1/6/2013 3:14:00 AM
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yep,Mandy u got it rt...its a true event...:)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/5/2013 3:08:00 AM
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Glorifying Life in a single verse! Marvelous ! Thank you
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 1/5/2013 10:44:00 AM
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thanks for the cmnt Demetrios...:))
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/4/2013 8:42:00 PM
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I really like your tanka expressing the feelings of a mother to be.
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 1/5/2013 2:09:00 AM
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thanks Andrea...:)

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