Hearing That Heartbeat

Hearing that heartbeat 
Felt shivers from tip to toe
Each kick so welcome
Weaving dreams for my unborn
A mother making process
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 4:08 PM
Great work expressing the joys and excitement of the expectant mother..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by my work..Your comments were encouraging..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 2:09 AM
I never thought of a child making a mother, very cool concept. On the day of your child's Birth it would be like you are both Born together.
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 3:13 AM
yes Richard...i hv experienced this process when i had my first baby...all thru the pregnancy ,i wondered wt it is to be a mother...read my poem 'Motherhood' and u will understand my journey into motherhood....:)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 7:47 AM
Beautiful Irfana if its a true event let me know xx
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 3:14 AM
yep,Mandy u got it rt...its a true event...:)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 3:08 AM
Glorifying Life in a single verse! Marvelous ! Thank you
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 10:44 AM
thanks for the cmnt Demetrios...:))
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 8:42 PM
I really like your tanka expressing the feelings of a mother to be.
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 2:09 AM
thanks Andrea...:)
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