Hear My Plea

So it seems maybe,
You must save me,
I beg, hear my plea,
Please say that you see.

I misjudged and fell,
Into a deep, dark well
But I rang your bell,
And YOU came, so swell.
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Deo Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 9:40 PM
Short, sweet, encouraging powerfully, Yes my Dear Sister with Greek Wisdom and Jesus's Hand: "He comes when we ring His "bell ... swell" as the Scripture doth tell. Eirene- shalom, shalom on a rainy Eastern Cape morning. Anil
Horne Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 7:00 AM
love this sweet write - hope you are well, my friend x
Edmonds  Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 11:27 AM
There’s always someone to ring their bell when you are feeling that life is hell… Belle
Eslinger Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Jennifer, here you have bared yourself in words if sweet sincere truth and honesty. The bell you ring will be answered by all genuinely giving souls and by the graces and promises of our knowing King, who probably reached to hold you even as you were asking. Here you have written a plea in the purity only true Poetry has XO
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September 29, 2021 at 2:43 PM
Lovely penning Jennifer, indeed always good when someone comes to our help. Hope all's well with you, I noticed in other comment you were saying it's 35c with you at the moment, that's really hot as over here we're struggling to get past 15c. Stay well and keep safe, hugs and blessings,Gordon
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September 25, 2021 at 7:16 PM
Hello Jennifer ... yes, we all find ourselves in a pickle at one time or another and are so grateful for assistance - thank you Jennifer. PS: had an earthquake last week and our house shook violently but thankfully no damage.
Proxenos Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 1:29 AM
That is awful Lindsay, you are approaching summer as we are, nothing to do with climate change perhaps? Glad you are all OK. We are in the first month of Summer and some days we reach 35, don't know what to expect as we reach the height of Summer in December, January and February. I understand that in Australia, you have reached 48, unthinkable. But people do adapt it was a very hot day for us but acceptable at 35 degrees. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.
Cunningham Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 12:38 PM
We all fall into that well as we go through life but following his path that he's shown us will lead us to safety. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 1:24 PM
I know you are right my friend faith is our only salvation. Blessings Jennifer
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Hello Jennifer, Love this poem. it sounds like a prayer. it is beautifully done. Hugs Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 3:07 PM
Hello Jennifer, I wish you a lovely weekend. You are welcome. Blessings.
Proxenos Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 12:12 PM
Hi my very dear friend thank you blessings jennifer
Liguori Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Great poem welcoming the reader to eagerly assist you! What can we do? :)
Proxenos Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Thank you Robert so sweet of you but it is just a poem of faith blessings jennifer
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