Lawrence Hoffman Sr Poet Blitz

Hear My Pain

see my pain.
hear my pain.
this pain plays a melody.
a melody in my heart.
whos sound is like razors.
razors through flesh.
tearing apart my broken heart.
broken by me.
hear my pain.
hear my song.
as it tears my heart.
tears my heart to shreads.
so small the pieces.
to never reasemble.
from my own doing.
am i to destroy everything?
the razors tear.
tear apart my heart.
this pain ive never felt.
no one to blame.
no one to blame but myself.
i beg the stars.
take away this pain.

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Lawrence Hoffman Sr March 30, 2017 at 6:35 PM im never listened to . it is my hope that this way i will be heard

Lawrence Hoffman Sr March 30, 2017 at 6:29 PM all of my work is first hand written and is part of a book im writing . it will be a poetic account of my life so yes these words may just release the pain inside

Charlotte Puddifoot March 30, 2017 at 6:20 PM i hear...releasing the words helps to release the pain...

Lawrence Hoffman Sr March 30, 2017 at 5:48 PM sometimes such pain cant be escaped this pain is my own doing

Heidi Sands March 30, 2017 at 5:34 PM The pain is heard in this writing. There is hope for healing to come .