Hear My Cry

Try my hardest to not let them see the pain and weariness break me. Pray to God to get me out. Hear the screams of fear from all around. Quiet my thoughts of doubt and despair while the weights around my ankles feel like a hundred pounds. The chains around my wrist remind me where I am. The sun beats down upon my head blurring my perception of whats ahead. I look down and find one dead, turn my head and there I see all the bodies of the deceased, lying at my feet. I know my time is almost near, as I cry a few more tears. Marching into the sun I see my life is almost gone. The desert sands start to burn I pray to God to take me home. My mind is weak my soul is dead there is nothing left to give. I am, who I am Even if it means I had to die. I am perfect in God's eyes!
10-5-2014 Death March
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 11/12/2014 1:43:00 AM
We all go thru times like this but there is always hope with God besides us nothing is impossible. Well written piece Cory! Congrats on the win Cheers! :) love and light! xxxx D.
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Date: 11/10/2014 11:02:00 PM
Nice write, congrats :)
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Date: 11/10/2014 9:11:00 AM
Amazing write, congrats on the win,
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Date: 10/6/2014 1:00:00 PM
Very expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this one today..If we have accepted Jesus as our Savior, the ruler of our lives then God only sees us through His shed blood and we are perfected through His sacrifice..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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Date: 10/6/2014 10:45:00 AM
Of course, you are perfect in God's eyes and for that reason your soul never dies! Very dynamic and provoking, filled with despair yet beautiful in its essence, dear Cory!
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Date: 10/5/2014 10:57:00 PM
This s wonderful piece Cory....cheers Tim
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