Hear Me Cry

Before I die
Hear me cry
Sometimes it seems
He knows my needs
At times it feels
Like this is real
Most times at night
He's out of sight
During the day
The same way
With each new lie
I die inside
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Stella Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 9:28 AM
congrats lena on this being featured this week such sad imagery and I know just how this feels me still feeling the sting everytime his name is mention keep up the great writing enjoyed
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September 18, 2010 at 5:27 PM
Hello, Lena here I am stopping by to say hi and CONGRATULATIONS! What a delightful poem. Had fun reading your featured poem of the week. Take care,.. p.d.
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September 13, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Lena. Love, Carol
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September 12, 2010 at 3:58 PM
Congrats Lolita on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all... hope u are doing well..with luv..
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February 16, 2009 at 5:44 AM
Hi, I decided to check out all your poems and this one really touched my heart. Like most people I know what it's like to go through what you have written about here and it makes me sad that other people have gone through the same thing, I hope you never have to feel this way again. By the way, why "Lolita"?.
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