Hear Me

Its not safe out there my boy, Only under this metal sheet u are. I too yearn for the frdedom, But letting you go? Only worries of the happenings will kill me. Please don't kill me before time Mother ,ooh mother,' It will only take a blink.. Back into ur arms I will b safely, And then freedom will b ours. This children don't listen, Only inside u will b safe, Am letting you go,but together we will go. Am terrified,please don't kill me before time

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Debra Falgout

Date: 9/19/2012 10:11:00 PM

A mothers fear of letting their child go into this world is terrifing thing, prayers with your loved ones, peace be with you, love debra

Wamaitha Beth
Date: 10/8/2012 4:10:00 PM

Dats true coz parents knows better thus they protect us by all means.thanx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/17/2012 2:23:00 PM

WAMAITHA, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD

Wamaitha Beth
Date: 9/17/2012 3:12:00 PM

Thanx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/4/2012 11:41:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Wamaitha. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Wamaitha Beth
Date: 9/5/2012 5:19:00 AM

@habib thanx I will study them

Wamaitha Beth
Date: 9/5/2012 5:17:00 AM

Thanx so much carol, i feel am at the right place.

Habib Akewusola
Date: 9/4/2012 2:57:00 PM

I love the simple words and a straight forward message great write up.. I pray your ink will never sleep,why not read some of my poems.