Hear Earth's Gentle Moaning

We go about our lives as if with no clue
that all around us things on earth are dying
as other “great’ activities we pursue.

Good habits should mean more than simply trying.
For many crimes, mankind should be atoning.
Humankind, BE kind, or you will be crying!

Prick up your ears, and hear Earth’s gentle moaning.
Hear it in the oceans filled with our debris.
Where she chokes from all our filth, Earth is groaning.

Hear the silent shrieks emitting from each tree.
With forests razed – oxygen is depleting.
Extinction of creatues already we see.

This senselessness we cannot keep repeating,
or a deserved tragic end we’ll be meeting.

March 12, 2021
for D.W. Rodgers' While Mother Earth Gently Moans Poetry Contest
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Delaney Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 4:30 PM
Hi Andrea: Congratulations.We all feel helpless at the damage that is happening to our earth. I didn’t understand the placements in this contest as there was no 1st. Place. Hope you are doing well. Hugs, SuZ
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 7:00 AM
You expressed this well. All the best in the contest. Hugs Rick.
Mcintosh Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 6:19 AM
So true. I love your thoughts here. God bless you with a win. Love you always, Gina
Jayasankar Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 4:45 AM
A poem so apt for the title with a great message Andrea..., specially second and third stanzas loved it...my FAV! Below is my son's comment, what he said to me..as he read this poem: The burning of fossil fuels and cutting of trees cause an intense decrease in oxygen level and increase in CO2 level in the atmosphere.. causing further damage to the atmosphere and nature... ~ Ani
Daniel Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 12:55 AM
So well written, Andrea, with the stark truth portrayed:)
Poet Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Prick up your ears, and hear Earth’s gentle moaning. Hear it in the oceans filled with our debris. So true, your excellent wording cannot go astray. Very nice job.
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 6:21 PM
If all the earth can do is gently moan then we should be doing the shouting, and your words talk loud and clear. Best of luck in the contest.
Woodrow Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 5:08 PM
awesome write...so true :)
Ball Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 1:57 PM
You tell it like it is my sister. It makes me crazy the way we go about our daily lives adding more and more junk to the earth's atmosphere and talking about how the earth needs us to care more BUT WE GO ON POLLUTING. Great job here. God Bless, JB
Hankins Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Excellent, my friend. The message is clear: "Earth is groaning." I enjoyed your poem so much I read it twice; now, I need to put the message into practice. Thanks! Good luck in the contest.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 10:50 AM
I can understand your preoccupations. Even the glaziers are dissolving. First the Industrial revolution, then the waste of plastic which we throw in the sea. Very meaningful poem.
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 10:31 AM
I hear the moaning earth in your poem's voice Andrea. Getting worse every day. Will humanity heed the warning?
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 10:23 AM
Well written!
Cunningham Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 10:17 AM
Well said Andrea, the warnings are there, mess with mother nature and she will hit back ten fold, this pandemic is just the start. Hope you're well. Tom
Devonshire Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Sadly, there is a lot of truth in this write and it makes me fear for our planet's future. Beautifully written, Andrea. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, carolyn
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