Hear

Behind the black olives redianted*
the moon this night
is handing over a bloomed sign.
Why are you going to bed alone
in colorful bed sheets?
Hear! In Syracusae troubadours are singing
in one love,
about that while you burn into,
you burn endlessly.
But you are falling asleep.
A domestic bird, hidden
behind curtains of brocade
and pressed her lips on a golden spider.

A homeless night in the black olives
and a sound of our Beyond.

* ? neologism created by the author expressing that something is shined on by radiance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/23/2014 1:04:00 PM
Intriguing, provoking, captivating! Excellent work my friend, Bozhidarand a HAPPY BITHDAY! Good luck with your neologism!
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Bozhidar Pangelov
Date: 10/23/2014 9:54:00 PM
Thank Demetrios! Beautiful flowers and sea let me be of your home- Greece.
Date: 10/23/2014 5:16:00 AM
Poetic justice...I enjoyed your thoughts...Best wishes from India...
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Bozhidar Pangelov
Date: 10/23/2014 9:55:00 PM
Thanks from Bulgaria!
Date: 10/23/2014 4:42:00 AM
I should say it is a successful neologism, one of the best I have seen."troubadours are singing" has made me nostalgic. In my childhood I have seen Indian version of troubadours strolling countryside. They sang about Lord Krishna in autumn. Thank you very much for the gift. Love Bozhidar. You are from the country of black olives I think. LOVE)))) RAJAT
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Bozhidar Pangelov
Date: 10/23/2014 10:00:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. Yes, I know about the songs in the fall for Lord Krishna in India. Here is a medieval troubadours of chivalric novels. And, alas, black olives grow in Demetrios in Greece - the neighboring country of Bulgaria.
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