Healing the Heart
Strong beam of light enters the room,
pointing out the mistakes in the settings,
no hidden darkness nor sharp object on the floor;
as water drips from the bottle
containing ice cold drink on the table,
He stretches his hands to mop the floor.
*Personification*
beam of light--good thought ;the room--mind ;hidden darkness--bad thought
sharp object--wickedness ;water--pains ; floor--heart ;
CONTEST:"kindle the lights"sponsored by Debbie Guzzi.
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