Healing Sun

For the first time 
I allow the sun to blaze into my eyes
To heal my injured cornea 
I allow the tender wind
To dry my watery eye
I await the sun to come back 
From every building we passed
For the first time 
I adore the shining surface
I willingly gave it a glance of beauty
It lusted upon my face giving it a blow of life
It came upon my dark life and gave it a glow
Gave it a hope, gave it the feeling of freedom 
The position of power
And For the first time 
Before the arrive of dusk 
I adored the sun…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 6, 2010 at 11:32 PM
Wow Louzana, what a deeply moving poem, how wonderful to appreciate the sun in a whole new light... btw there's an extra "n" in shining-- hope this helps-- thank you for sharing this inspiring poem...nikko :)
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September 6, 2010 at 11:59 AM
What a nice and deep outcome 4 U. When it comes to tears, mine are all dry. Not out of a new shining life. I think I got tired of life not making sense. One day I plan to enjoy the rising of the sun. For right now I will wait in the dusk with no position of power. Enjoyed your poem*luv~SKAT
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