CayCay Godwin Poet Dizain

Healing Sincerity

please  my heart begs you stifle each false thought
          i see wounding words forming in your eyes

spoken false words will shape us more distraught
           than the swelled tussle we now realize

best we speak core truth lest we spin crosswise
i urge healing sincerity from you
not jabs to maim me thoroughly dark blue

let your heart tenderly engage with mine
that our fine love may strengthen its purview
of harmonies value in its design

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Carrie Richards September 17, 2016 at 5:54 PM This is so wonderful, CayCay....I'm so pleased to see that it placed high! The form not as easy as one first imagines, but you make it work perfectly, with so much heart. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick September 13, 2016 at 10:18 AM Your Dizain poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Jenni Kalicharan September 12, 2016 at 7:54 AM Powerful words. Thanks for sharing. Congrats

Janis Medders Tobechi September 11, 2016 at 1:18 PM Beautiful dizain! Congratulations.

Eve Roper September 11, 2016 at 12:07 PM Beautiful CayCay, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Jan Allison September 11, 2016 at 10:35 AM Love the title, love the poem ... I mean that most sincerely CayCay:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Phillip Garcia September 11, 2016 at 9:39 AM This really is masterfully done. Very lovely and powerful. Kudos and congrats!

Beautiful Scars September 11, 2016 at 9:27 AM CayCay! when I saw you on the winners list I was not surprised lovely lady :) It's like you knew exactly what I would love to read in a dizain, loved it :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Connie Marcum Wong September 10, 2016 at 11:12 PM Your poem is an intelligent lovely little masterpiece CayCay! When harsh words are hurled they make mental wounds that take much longer to heal than physical ones do. This poem left me in awe of your talent! I really hope this does well! ; ) 7

Constance La France September 10, 2016 at 12:05 PM CayCay, wonderfully penned, it really made me think, that if people would just talk things out instead of throwing insults and hurtful words, well done ~

Daniel Turner September 9, 2016 at 10:51 AM This reader can certainly feel the angst in your words, CayCay. Insecurity always leads to chaos. Good luck in contest.