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Healing Our Personal Wounds

We've all wounds without and within
thinking we know how to heal
but wounds are not always what they seem
for on the surface nothing you can feel

Look intently right in so deep
take a knife scrape right away 
clear out whatever hides the source
then the wound's clear, no more clay

Some of our wounds need real-time
whatever their pain patiently wait
they've their own way of working
by turning the key you've opened the gate

These wounds come with a plan
sent down to teach us a lesson
each of us different ones to learn
but it's all part of a greater blessing

Some feel only the pain
blind to anything good
inward thoughts engulf them
learning bare firmly nude

I've written this based on the quotation by Tracie Peterson (1959- present) Christian fiction writer.

"We're all dealing with the wounds we've been given.  Some folks just don't know how to let the wounds heal."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/30/2020 7:40:00 PM
Nicely written, my friend. Wonderful thoughts about the wounds in our lives, past and present. Hope you are safe and well ~ John
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 5/1/2020 9:20:00 AM
Glad you liked this one John, we are safe over here and my cough is nearly away so feeling a lot better. Take care my good friend, Blessings always,Gordon
Date: 4/24/2020 6:48:00 PM
I enjoyed this one Gordon, that line inspired a beautiful poem that provokes thoughts :) hugs
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 4/25/2020 2:31:00 AM
Hi Sandy, Glad you enjoyed it and it provoked some thoughts. Trust you're well, keep safe and well. Blessings and hugs, Gordon

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