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Healing

Wrapped in distress Wishing her ache became less Her hurt obliviate. Time soothes but never heals Hand of poetry wounds seals. May 13th, 2018

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/27/2018 10:01:00 AM

It does, indeed; well-penned, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/28/2018 5:53:00 AM

So much elated and humbled by your lovely feedback! My honour and pleasure M.L. Kiser.. Be blessed always.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/16/2018 1:33:00 AM

Excellent, the hand of poetry, nice :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/16/2018 2:25:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Heidi! With pleasure and great delight I receive your appreciation.. Humbled. Stay blessed.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/14/2018 6:06:00 AM

Yes so true 'Time soothes but never heals', and your concluding line says it all. Poetry does help to seal wounds. Extremely profound your words my dear Besma. I hope you did something special with your family on Mother's Day?...Maria xxx

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/14/2018 6:43:00 AM

Dear Maria, overwhelmed with your generosity, your warm visits and elating feedbacks! A generous beautiful soul bestowing me so precious a time to read my humble words and dip her heart into my very soul! Bunches of Love and thanks. Stay blessed. Here in Tunisia, we celebrate Mother's Day on the last Sunday of May. Hugs dear Maria.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/13/2018 11:25:00 AM

Profound words concealing truths difficult to bear dearest, Besma! Magnificently written!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/13/2018 11:44:00 AM

Your visit is an honour and your genuine and valuable feedback is always a great pleasure to read. Thank you so much dear Demetrio. Shine and stay blessed.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/13/2018 6:46:00 AM

So much said in these few words, Besma..feelings of distress, yet some relief as you end your poem with: Hand of poetry wounds seals.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/13/2018 7:47:00 AM

A great joy dear Vijay to share with you my passion for words. Thank you dear for your valuable and praising feedback. Shine whenever you dip your soul into poetry.

Virginia Waters

Date: 5/13/2018 2:57:00 AM

You certainly have a knack for tanka! I'm collecting yours in my fav's. Love always - V

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/13/2018 3:11:00 AM

My pleasure dear Virginia, so much humbled by your generous and praising feedback! I'm tremendously honoured by your visit. Thank you so much. Stay blessed.