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Healing

Wrapped in distress
Wishing her ache became less
Her hurt obliviate.
Time soothes but never heals
Hand of poetry wounds seals.


May 13th,  2018

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M. L. Kiser

August 27, 2018 at 10:01 AM

It does, indeed; well-penned, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri

August 28, 2018 at 5:53 AM

So much elated and humbled by your lovely feedback! My honour and pleasure M.L. Kiser.. Be blessed always.

Heidi Sands

May 16, 2018 at 1:33 AM

Excellent, the hand of poetry, nice :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 16, 2018 at 2:25 AM

Thank you so much dear Heidi! With pleasure and great delight I receive your appreciation.. Humbled. Stay blessed.

Maria Williams

May 14, 2018 at 6:06 AM

Yes so true 'Time soothes but never heals', and your concluding line says it all. Poetry does help to seal wounds. Extremely profound your words my dear Besma. I hope you did something special with your family on Mother's Day?...Maria xxx

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 14, 2018 at 6:43 AM

Dear Maria, overwhelmed with your generosity, your warm visits and elating feedbacks! A generous beautiful soul bestowing me so precious a time to read my humble words and dip her heart into my very soul! Bunches of Love and thanks. Stay blessed. Here in Tunisia, we celebrate Mother's Day on the last Sunday of May. Hugs dear Maria.

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 13, 2018 at 11:25 AM

Profound words concealing truths difficult to bear dearest, Besma! Magnificently written!

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 13, 2018 at 11:44 AM

Your visit is an honour and your genuine and valuable feedback is always a great pleasure to read. Thank you so much dear Demetrio. Shine and stay blessed.

Vijay Pandit

May 13, 2018 at 6:46 AM

So much said in these few words, Besma..feelings of distress, yet some relief as you end your poem with: Hand of poetry wounds seals.

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 13, 2018 at 7:47 AM

A great joy dear Vijay to share with you my passion for words. Thank you dear for your valuable and praising feedback. Shine whenever you dip your soul into poetry.

Virginia Waters

May 13, 2018 at 2:57 AM

You certainly have a knack for tanka! I'm collecting yours in my fav's. Love always - V

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 13, 2018 at 3:11 AM

My pleasure dear Virginia, so much humbled by your generous and praising feedback! I'm tremendously honoured by your visit. Thank you so much. Stay blessed.

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