Heal

heal
                                                     on hill 
                                                  mountain
                                                step upward
                                                   carefully
                                              to feel own life
                                              never look back 
                                                go ahead on
                                          keep stamina strong
                                              maintain balance
                                              in every spheres 
                                                reach the top 
                                                stand a while 
                                                 come back
                                                 to ground
                                                     smile 


                                Written on: 17th July 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marie Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 3:40 PM
A delightful inspiring piece brimming with wisdom. Love the title, the shape, the feel of your words - love your writing! blessings, lynn
Devnath  Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 12:13 AM
Thanks for your appreciation and blessings my friend. Sorry for late repply. i am in official tour now. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 6:23 PM
very nice one. And I enjoyed its message
Devnath  Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 9:19 PM
Thanks for your appreciation my friend. Hugs, bl
Gasun Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Great poem with great food for thought my dear friend, BL! Great job my dear friend. Thanks for sharing and best wishes! love and hug, Leonora
Devnath  Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your high appreciation. Loved always, bl
La France Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 6:06 PM
BL, love the lesson in this verse, well done, 7 ~
Devnath  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 6:08 PM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your comment with beautiful appreciation and 7. Loved always, bl
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