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Breath in sea’s Briny silence Expel Scathing whispers Hush tireless tones Of self loathe Release let your breath mimic The ocean’s heart beat of Aqua symphony Absorb Hypnotic pulse Heal Know you are enough Yalto poems only contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet 16th September 2019

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Date: 10/31/2019 8:11:00 AM
This is a poem of perfect calm before the storm, El. Your deep thoughts give waves and shiny waves of inner reflection. Aurora bright poetry. Love and more love always.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Freddie :-) x
Date: 10/29/2019 7:11:00 AM
Hello Elaine Perin, Beautiful words to a lovely poem. It makes me feel like i am near the ocean. Have a nice day my friend.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 6:06:00 AM
That’s lovely to hear, thank you so much :-) x
Date: 9/26/2019 8:32:00 AM
I really like this piece. Being near the Ocean is when I feel closest to God.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/26/2019 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Richard. I’m glad you enjoyed it :-) x
Date: 9/21/2019 10:40:00 AM
Always my dream scene. Me, Myself, and I on the beach. I don't want to visit, I want to live forever. Picture perfect moment... **Niyna.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/21/2019 12:46:00 PM
Most definitely ! Sounds amazing . :-) x
Date: 9/21/2019 8:47:00 AM
Bravo. Wonderful, Elaine.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/21/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thank you , I really appreciate your lovely feed back :-)
Date: 9/16/2019 5:32:00 PM
this is wonderful Elaine...really flows nicely for dramatic pausing effect :)
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/17/2019 3:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely feed back David. It’s very much appreciated as I’m just starting to find the confidence to share my writing :-) x
Date: 9/16/2019 2:52:00 PM
WOW! This is so well written, Elaine..my very best for a TOP win.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/17/2019 3:50:00 AM
Hi Vijay, thank you so much for such kind feed back, it means a lot :-)

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