Headwaters

Head waters join to form streams then rivers together flowing to distant ocean

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Lynn Marie

Date: 3/31/2017 11:48:00 PM

I adore water. this is lovely and the form so well suited to your words. Nicely done Dave :-) lynnxxx

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 4/1/2017 2:04:00 PM

Thanks Lynn and yes the Tetractys form is based a natural series and is fun to work with.

Funom Makama

Date: 2/18/2016 9:14:00 AM

This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/21/2016 11:33:00 AM

Thanks Funom, sometimes it's nice to play with forms.

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 1/22/2016 9:13:00 AM

Interesting form in every way. Dave, tell me more about your contest, please. And thanks for stopping by with your warmth.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/25/2016 11:28:00 AM

Thanks Iris and thanks for stopping by too. In my contest I'm asking for poems in the villanelle form http://www.poetrysoup.com/dictionary/villanelle on a Valentine theme. The rest is up to you.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/23/2016 8:53:00 PM

Thanks Irisand stopping by. In the the Valentine Villanelle contest, I'm looking for poems using the villanelle form on Valentine themes. I posted a bit more on it in the Blogs http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=29583&PoetID=43288