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Trees growing so high,
and stones resting down below-
 but moss climbing both.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Scripca Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 6:47 PM
An interesting, "multidirectional" haiku, Ismael. Congratulations. Love, Iolanda
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November 7, 2009 at 5:01 PM
Congrats Ismael on your haiku being featured. Vince
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November 6, 2009 at 4:19 PM
Congrats on your wonderful feature write this week! Love Light Patty
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November 3, 2009 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations on being featured--Charma
Fraser Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 1:14 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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November 2, 2009 at 3:56 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ismael. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 1:50 PM
intersting! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 12:46 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Ismael. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Kurth Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 6:41 AM
nice Haiku. Was this inspired by the picture in Raul's contest? It could be. Krista
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September 5, 2009 at 4:02 AM
Nicely written Haiku. I can see the place. Sara
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September 5, 2009 at 2:59 AM
Great observation. Clever and unique! Love, Carolyn
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