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Head rush

I got up way too fast, Went on and on , My brain have lost it's ground and I am on my own, once more the gravity still fights, And I am at war again, a lost soul.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/3/2024 7:47:00 AM

If a soul can contemplate it is not lost. Gravity however can impinge its flight. Few words but your piece encourages contemplation.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:50:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Tetractys poem in Ink Empress contest, Lioness :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 5:06:00 AM

I know you were being sarcastic here reading your take. But somehow this made me sad, and i felt so much as i read this papi. Lost soul and being in a war mentally is never easy. You’ve expressed so much here without you even realising, how poignant and powerful it is. Pleasure reading this touching and soulful take. Congratulations on your win

Silent One

Date: 11/14/2023 1:29:00 AM

Oh no dear... I can sense despair in your words... i hope you win this war and your soul can find a way home..

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 11/15/2023 12:05:00 AM

Hahaha brothaaa … all hell is letting loooose ae