This is actually a true story. I was 12 years old and my older brother was 14. Sometimes the littleler guy gets the upper-hand...and boy, the elder brother well deserved a whoopin' this time (lol)
On a sun-filled day, and a cloudless sky We yearned adventure...my brother and I The woods out yonder- called our names Traveling echoes, spoke..."let's play games" Early aged, our thrill- playing (Hide-n-Seek) We'd play for hours, near "Crooked Creek" As I hid motionless- in a ditch of clay A grown-ups voice; whispered "Come this way" A strangers voice- I heard... I cried When he spoke low-pitched, said- "I saw you hide" When I turned my neck, goose-bumped from fear I peed my pants- seen no one there In my soaked undies, and my yellowed jeans I yelled to my brother...to hear my screams My devilish brother, jumped...from a tree And laughed like hell, said "That was me" So, I chased his tail 'round "Picken's Pass" And for the first time ever- I kicked his ... Story From Your Childhood Poetry Contest Sponsor: L. Milton Hawkins 12-8-2020
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