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He Who Offers Me Sun

Meeting you was like being greeted by sunlight The hair on my skin reaching to take you all in Embellishing the energy you radiate from within Just feeling your rays running along my skin Such warmth and happiness envelopes my heart You make me realise I’m alive inside once again Knocking on that door of chance and a new friend Love again, a place that I would never expect to see But this is the dream that someday I know will come The mystery man that I meet who offers me the sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/18/2012 3:42:00 PM
I checked out and liked your Blog.
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Date: 12/8/2012 10:50:00 AM
He will be eclipsed by your Beauty and will be powerless under your spell. Wonderful piece Shaz, really enjoyed it.
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 12/8/2012 6:02:00 PM
Hey Rick aaaaaw ty :)
Date: 12/1/2012 12:40:00 AM
I hope he was a nice guy? Worthy of your beautiful poetry. :o)
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 12/1/2012 4:21:00 AM
Well I hope he is too - one day when I meet that person who makes me feel like that poem :)
Date: 10/6/2012 7:49:00 AM
beautifully written! thank you for your wonderful comments on my poetry! i look forward to reading more of your work!
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/6/2012 7:57:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by Germaine, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I really liek this one myself :D
Date: 10/4/2012 8:23:00 PM
Absolutely loved it Shaz! Kudos for a beautiful romantic write! I have found a new poet friend! Love and big hugs, Jack xox
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/6/2012 7:57:00 AM
Aaaw thanks Jack mwah :D
Date: 10/3/2012 7:08:00 PM
Your title is just as captivating as your body...body of your poetry. My heartfelt thanks for your praises.
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/3/2012 9:04:00 PM
Thank you Glenn. Glad this poem got your attention :)
Date: 10/3/2012 9:53:00 AM
this is beautiful!
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/3/2012 9:02:00 PM
Thank you ilene. Glad u enjoyed it
Date: 10/3/2012 8:59:00 AM
hauntingly beautiful work of art, chaz... you took me there!..love that ending especially... :) huggs!
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/3/2012 9:02:00 PM
Thank you nette.... :)
Date: 10/3/2012 6:39:00 AM
thats a little too hot,can I offer you the moon,lol,great write Shaz
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/3/2012 7:32:00 AM
hehehe......cute! - Shaz
Date: 10/3/2012 4:09:00 AM
ur content is rich.but ur packaging needsa boost.i am watching out for you.
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/3/2012 7:31:00 AM
Hey love the feedback.....I agree i do feel lost in 'the packaging' dept sometimes lol shaz

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