He Whispers

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Poetry/Verse/he whispers
Copyright Protected, 0D 09-1580-899-24
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written September 20, 2023
For the International Contest, Bite Size Poem No. 72
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 09/28/2023

Honorable Mention


his eyes follow me and he whispers-  come my beauty
as I stand staring at this old painting of a man
his dark eyes are fathomless pools-  and I am drawn to him
I could love this man within a frame, old
I want to stroke his long, soft raven hair
kiss his full lips and hands . . .

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2023 8:35:00 PM

So romantic, Dear Heart. Congrats to make her list.

Constance La France
Date: 10/4/2023 8:05:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the comment and congrats on my placement, appreciate.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/21/2023 10:03:00 AM

Every poem of yours makes me tear up sigh! Evocative! And so touching. Felt so much reading this talented poetess! You are truly a gifted poetess! I wish i can express like you do! Flawless

Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2023 3:47:00 PM

Ink, thank you so much for the lovely compliment, so appreciate.