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He watched with Love

He watched with love; eyes filled with pride. Down slowly walked the aisle his bride. He whispered “Thanks” to God above. Eyes filled with pride, he watched with love. She walked to him with style and grace. Tears freely poured on down his face. His light for her would never dim. With style and grace, she walked to him. Held hand in hand these two were wed. Vows both declared with love when said. Faced to each other they would stand. These two were wed, held hand in hand. This man and wife their kiss it sealed. He veils removed her face revealed. Two wedding rings stayed on for life. Their kiss it sealed, this man and wife.

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Date: 7/1/2024 9:30:00 PM
This is very sweet, Christine. Thanks for trying my contest and congrats
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Christine Watts
Date: 7/2/2024 5:09:00 AM
Hi Andrea Thank you it was based on my sons wedding and he did cry when he saw his bride walking down the aisle. Nice to have a place in your contest Thank you Cheers Christine
Date: 6/12/2024 11:59:00 AM
A beautiful depiction of the wedding :-D The kind many dream of ...
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Christine Watts
Date: 6/13/2024 3:31:00 AM
Thank you very much for your review it was based on my son’s wedding he did cry as she walked down the isle they are very happy snd now have 2 gorgeous children Cheers
Date: 6/12/2024 11:32:00 AM
That’s simply divine Christine, very romantic, a lovely Swap Quatrain… Beryl
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Christine Watts
Date: 6/13/2024 3:34:00 AM
Hi Beryl Many Thanks for reading and reviewing my swap Quatrain it is based on my sons wedding his tears made us all cry they now have 2 gorgeous kids Cheers

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