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He Was Smoking Hot

Well he was smoking The stream that came From his mouth Looked like the exhaust From a fast moving Trailways diesel bus

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 10/22/2009 6:58:00 AM
shiver..mano man! GOOD my fav's (and it ain't easy to get there ;)) Light & Love
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Date: 10/21/2009 4:40:00 PM
You had me going on this one, was not expecting the end, good write...thanks of The Old Outhouse....not good memeories, but remembered well..That God awful Castor oil, can still tastes the stuff..Danny
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Date: 10/21/2009 12:33:00 PM
LOL! Good one Sara, You caught me by surprise with this one ha! Thanks, needed the chuckle. Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/21/2009 9:21:00 AM
Good imagery, Sara! Reminds me of those days long ago when I indulged- 17 years ago with a little help, I gave it up!! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/21/2009 7:16:00 AM
Cigarette smoke, or smoking hot body?.....:JP]
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Date: 10/21/2009 6:12:00 AM
Sara .. what a great piece of poetic verse.. u certainly have style .. keep writing more.. thoroughly enjoyed.... Linda-Marie
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