He Was Smoking Hot

Well he was smoking The stream that came From his mouth Looked like the exhaust From a fast moving Trailways diesel bus

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/22/2009 6:58:00 AM

shiver..mano man! GOOD ONE..to my fav's (and it ain't easy to get there ;)) Light & Love

Danny Nunn

Date: 10/21/2009 4:40:00 PM

You had me going on this one, was not expecting the end, good write...thanks of The Old Outhouse....not good memeories, but remembered well..That God awful Castor oil, can still tastes the stuff..Danny

P Sheart

Date: 10/21/2009 12:33:00 PM

LOL! Good one Sara, You caught me by surprise with this one ha! Thanks, needed the chuckle. Love Light Truth Patty

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/21/2009 9:21:00 AM

Good imagery, Sara! Reminds me of those days long ago when I indulged- 17 years ago with a little help, I gave it up!! Peace, Audrey

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/21/2009 7:16:00 AM

Cigarette smoke, or smoking hot body?.....:JP]

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2009 6:12:00 AM

Sara .. what a great piece of poetic verse.. u certainly have style .. keep writing more.. thoroughly enjoyed.... Linda-Marie