He Was Smoking Hot

Well he was smoking
The stream that came
From his mouth
Looked like the exhaust
From a fast moving 
Trailways diesel bus
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 6:58 AM
shiver..mano man! GOOD ONE..to my fav's (and it ain't easy to get there ;)) Light & Love
Nunn Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 4:40 PM
You had me going on this one, was not expecting the end, good write...thanks of The Old Outhouse....not good memeories, but remembered well..That God awful Castor oil, can still tastes the stuff..Danny
Sheart Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 12:33 PM
LOL! Good one Sara, You caught me by surprise with this one ha! Thanks, needed the chuckle. Love Light Truth Patty
Haick Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 9:21 AM
Good imagery, Sara! Reminds me of those days long ago when I indulged- 17 years ago with a little help, I gave it up!! Peace, Audrey
Pickett Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 7:16 AM
Cigarette smoke, or smoking hot body?.....:JP]
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October 21, 2009 at 6:12 AM
Sara .. what a great piece of poetic verse.. u certainly have style .. keep writing more.. thoroughly enjoyed.... Linda-Marie
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