He Told Me

Suddenly I see
that the basement is flooded
up to my knees
rendering me helpless
wondering how to scoop it out
with just this small cup in my hands

And how could I have
not known this or forgotten
water sloshing 
dark in ominous circles
being cold and somehow foreign – 
while every drop I know by name

And for a moment
with this small cup in my hands 
I stand puzzled 
while awareness slips away
just like water slipping through cracks 
caused by my ambiguity

And again I go
through all the daily motions
with no idea
what's lapping at my knees
and don't hear the cool shivers crackle
In the hours of my ignorance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 8, 2010 at 10:38 PM
Very profound poem. I enjoyed that. Susan
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