He Thought Himself to be a Work of Art


                                                 Upon the central wall he faced the room

                                                His face was always sought in joy or gloom

                                           The children stood and watched his moving hands

                                          His heartbeat beat in rhythm to life's strands

                                            
                                            When one day came a visitor to the house

                                              And oh, the arts indeed did she espouse

                                               She chided so the mother living there

                                      That the wall would look much better if left bare

                                  She said "Look at that, cheaply bought at mart,

                                              You need a bit of true refining art!"

                                            At the ending of her long and dreary call, 

                                         He found himself pulled from the central wall, 

                                           And hidden in a box, not suitable for clocks

                                              Tucked 'way and left hidden in a room, 

                                                of musty air and silent dusty gloom

                                                    

                                             The years passed by, he wondered why

                                              His face long missed had borne no cry

                                                His heartbeat long left off its beat

                                                   His hands idle, dreary defeat

                                                  
                                                 He went to sleep within a heap
                                           
                                                   And oh, that sleep was long

                                           No chime, no time, no reason or rhyme
                                             
                                                     No children's happy song

                                      
                                             Something woke him. What is that? 

                                                      Doors are opening, light!

                                                A lamp switched on, dusty as he

                                                        Now shining very bright!

                                             Unboxed, the dust flies everywhere

                                              It looks like smoke that fills the air!

                                                    An old man lifts him out, 

                                                Cried with a cheerful shout.

                                           "This is it! I know, without doubt!"

                                              
                                                  The old man was a child, 

                                             Well, had been years before

                                    But since had grown, and left the home

                                               And even been through war.

                                          
                                                 The times had changed,

                                                        And so had he

                                            The children in their seventies

                                      

                                       Now his face shines with such pride 

                                     His heartbeat takes the years in stride

                                          His hands are busy, all the time

                                         His song at noon, a cheery chime

                                      

                                         He thought himself a piece of art

                                            When young and felt the part

                                      But now he's sure he's fine treasure

                                                 And knows he is unique

                                                           A rare find,

                                                         He's antique!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Shaw Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 7:17 PM
Some visitors I think need to be boxed, because it sounds to me that old clock sure rocked . . . lol
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 7:28 PM
So true Indiana ;) <3
Crandall Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 9:49 AM
This is just a wonderful poem! I feel better about being almost 70 suddenly!
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 5:57 AM
Seventy is right around the corner for us too David, I will be 67 is June, my hubby only has two years to go before he is 70! We have a dear old doctor, he says 60 is middle aged because in the Bible, it is said that people can live to be 120. He is nearing 90 and still practicing! He is still doing great! What an inspiration to have a doctor with that idea in mind. He left his medical license a few years ago, but also practiced natural healing even as a medical doctor. He simply practices the natural medicine now, and is a great doctor. I am truly lucky to have him! When medical doctors told me I had little to no hope in a health situation I was facing, he proved them wrong. I am doing so much better under his care, I feel like the old clock :) Busy and raring to go! 70 is the new 40 ;)
George Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 4:28 AM
So, when the child grew up and unearthed the hidden treasure left discarded, its fate changed. From the suffocating air of the box, once again it was placed at the center of the wall. Now it has an identity. It is a treasured antique piece ! Great personification and a very touching story, dear BJ.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 5:49 AM
Thank you Valsa! Yes, truly, sometimes what is ordinary and deemed valueless to others despite the gift it was created to serve in is discarded, and yet sought and remembered by some. The old clock may have been a run of the mill item, but served it's purpose, but now, after many decades, it has value and was missed by the youngsters who once appreciated it a long time ago! I love old clocks. I had one in mind as I wrote this, I would love to have the old clock that had been on the wall in my childhood days.
Ball Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 11:41 PM
Too cute BJ. Love the way you bring the old clock to life. Nicely done. God Bless, JB
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 5:44 AM
Thank you Judy :) I'm so happy you are back, even though I too am absent from the site more than I want to be. It's so nice to read your comment! Hugs to you sweet friend :) <3
Kendrick Avatar
March 27, 2026 at 5:46 AM
I read this one with one thought in mind from the title then it went in another directions, then slews of questions are left without answers. Now I am thinking how like the man my life has been out in the open needed, then put away in the closet, then pulled out and used then put away, but there is always a place for us even when we feel that our lives are not useful. Sometimes God puts people in our path to help us grow in character and it is not so much about us but about them. Sara K
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 5:41 AM
The thought of what was in my heart when I wrote this poem was what is valuable to us and how sometimes others may take away the joy of a personal treasure in judgement of what is acceptable or not in their eyes. When I was little, we had a clock that was so pretty, it had beams around it like sunrays, it was in the 60's, and was popular at the time. I had a rich great aunt, and when we visited her vast home, it was filled with antiques and French art, I felt she looked down on us as we hadn't continued in the traditions of the family, sadly, she isn't remembered for kindness. Her home was filled with fancy clocks, some grandfather and some grandmother clocks were discarded in her basement. I was sad about those beautiful clocks when I was little. One day, our own clock just suddenly disappeared, and though it was cheap, it was stylish. I wish I had it now. It would be pretty near antique now!
Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2026 at 12:54 PM
This is a very nice piece of nostalgic poetry. It kind of reminded of an old Disney ? song about a clock that stops when it's owned dies. Well, in the sense that your poem is so emotive!
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 5:32 AM
Oh, I remember the old song, was that an old Disney? I just thought about an old clock we had when I was a little girl, I wish I had it now. I was looking on ebay for one, it wouldn't be the same clock, but I'd still love to have one like it. Thank you for your visit and comment Andrea :)
Sands Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 2:25 PM
Excellent poem. I enjoyed this. I read it twice. I hope all is well :)
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 17, 2026 at 5:37 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and comment Heidi! Yes, I'm doing well, I hope that 2026 finds all good with you too <3 Happy New Year! As much as I tell myself I want to be more present on this site, I find that there is a constant whirl of responsibilities and 'life' presenting itself as barriers to be here as much as I wish I could be. Time seems to mount up into weeks or even months sometimes, before I finally am able to be here. We are doing good though, and my hopes for a more constant presence on site to read, comment and write will hopefully soon be realized in the coming year ahead. I was so happy to login and find your sweet comment here :) Be blessed sweet Heidi! <3
Mcintosh Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful... I sent you a email. I don't know if you got it. God bless you, love, Gina
Legros Kelley Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 7:44 PM
I did see the message and responded back <3 :) May our Lord bless you as well dear Gina! <3
Godwin Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:15 AM
I adore your poem; the idea itself is impressively creative. Your poem even stirred up emotions within me, something about the 'feel' it conveys got me. WONDERFUL and sensitive, I truly do ADORE it. I want to be sure you meant to type 'so' rather than 'to'? in this line 'She chided so the mother living there.' I feel need to read a few more of yours, I can't recall how often/if I read your work, there is so much on Soup that falls thru the cracks.
Legros Kelley Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 7:51 PM
I am so happy that you like my poem so much, and I appreciate your visits and comments <3 I will look back over the lines, yes, I think that 'so' was the preferred word, it certainly fits better, thank you! I am afraid that because I am only able to be on here rather sporadically with my schedules, that when I do, I am in catch up mode and with that, can't catch up and often people aren't sure if I'm coming back on site, so I'm sure that is probably the case with you not seeing a lot of my poems. I'm the same way, I have a hard time getting to everyone's poems, and I miss so much. I always hope there will come a time when I will be able to bask in the glow of others poetry. I appreciate you so much CayCay :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 5:26 AM
Wonderful. Symbolism rules your poem. Took me a while to see the clock on the wall. Great imagery.
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 12:29 AM
Thank you Victor :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 9:15 PM
What a unique story of a clock personified. Love it. A fave
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 12:29 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, and a fave, that is such an honor <3 :)
Hind Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Moving work, I love this picture this creates, an old man, an antique
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 12:27 AM
Thank you Paige :)
Wolf Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 8:22 PM
You brought me into the persona of the antique clock, Bj. A Wonderful write. Thank you, Gershon
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 3:50 AM
Thank you Gershon, I always feel happy when an antique is discovered and treasured. I love old clocks, and have a few that I treasure, though no antique ones as of yet. I'm getting older though, so maybe one day the ones I own will be prized relics from the olden days :)
Poet Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 12:58 PM
Dear BJ, your fantastic poem tells a compelling story with a clear diction arc. The use of imagery and symbolism is well-executed, adding depth to the story. While the story has a few predictable elements, it manages to maintain interest through the character's transformation and the unexpected turn at the end.
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 3:36 AM
Thank you Sotto, I know it needs some work, I sometimes go back and edit after a few looks at my poems. I was remembering the old clocks in my great aunt's home, she had more than one old clock, including grandfather, grandmother, and a wide assortment of others of various sizes and they seemed so lonely in her basement, in my childhood mind :) I wonder if any of them were rescued, I would have loved to own even the smallest of them, except honestly, they would need some work in restoration as it was musty and dusty in that overfilled room of relics!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 8:56 AM
WOW!!!  What a creative write/story you have here. Love This One... Great last line. I know how he felt. I am just 25 each year. Hahaha!!!! Have a lovely/fun day writing away...............
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 3:28 AM
Oh, I have thought of doing that, but most of my kids would be older than me then, so it wouldn't work! :D Thank you for your visits and very encouraging comments Paula, I hope you have a lovely day as well :) <3
Maverick Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 11:24 PM
I found myself creaking in time, to this At the end my friend.' A write that Spans many minds, and lives of various Kind, in settings myriad..Echoes will Share, scattering midst lifes ages..though each part be so rare.)
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 3:26 AM
Wow, your comment was a creative and wonderful poem in itself, thank you so much. You should share it on your site, it is a great little piece :)
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