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He Thanks a Distant Observer

I was blessed by the Lord with a very lifting and gentle breeze, A lady entered my life and set my mind and soul at comforting ease, She sees all that I do that is inside my thoughts and in my heart, Peace that I needed when this began so long ago at the start. Thank you for believing in me; this made me bright today, I had not smiled like I did this very morning or in that way, Simply because I was not believed before you came along, In my prolonged grief or the lies that people create in song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/6/2011 7:14:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read your poetry M.M. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and inspiration to continue your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/6/2011 2:38:00 AM
How wonderful it is to have someone who believes in us, encourages us, and holds us dear unto themselves. (God does this, doesn't he!) Nice tribute to your friend. NOTE: Thank you for your comment about my poem "Temerity." I have changed the word never to seldom in the line about meekness. Absolute generalizations almost always cause "trouble"! I responded as a result to your comment on my poem, "Miracles Happen." May God continue to be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 5/5/2011 9:02:00 PM
Love can do this. I too have been recently blessed with a wonderful lady. I hope you and yours last forever:) God Bless R.M.
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