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He Tended Her Garden

Her spirit lived in the garden's bright blooms. Tended with a solemn vow that he'd kept. Their scent reminded him of her perfumes. While planting, his sad heart mournfully wept. Tended with a solemn vow that he'd kept, Although years had passed since her tragic death. He hoed and weeded, Autumn leaves were swept, fulfilling his promise to his wife, Beth. Although years had passed since her tragic death, he still carried fresh flowers to her grave in bouquets with lilies and baby's breath. Sorrow engulfed him like a crashing wave. He still carried fresh flowers to her grave Their scent reminded him of her perfumes Sorrow engulfed him like a crashing wave Her spirit lived in the garden's bright blooms. June 6th, 2021 ~ Photo #5 Pantoum Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper

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Date: 6/6/2021 7:28:00 AM
Such a wonderful Pantoum rhyme , Jenna:-) Your poetry is always on point! Good luck in the contest, my friend.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/7/2021 4:39:00 AM
Hi, Edward, and thank you so very much for your kind remarks.
Date: 6/6/2021 7:06:00 AM
This is brilliant and breathtaking and brings my soul chills... I love it! Amazing and a sure winner. Love it. God bless you Sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/6/2021 7:08:00 AM
Thanks so very much for the kindness of your thoughts, Gina. They're appreciated.
Date: 6/6/2021 5:14:00 AM
How wonderful you composed your pantoum even though on a sad note. I can relate to it though. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/6/2021 5:33:00 AM
I'm sorry if it's awakened sad memories for you, Victor. Thank you for another thoughtful visit to my poetry.

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