He Tended Her Garden

Her spirit lived in the garden's bright blooms.
Tended with a solemn vow that he'd kept.
Their scent reminded him of her perfumes.
While planting, his sad heart mournfully wept.

Tended with a solemn vow that he'd kept,
Although years had passed since her tragic death.
He hoed and weeded, Autumn leaves were swept,
fulfilling his promise to his wife, Beth.

Although years had passed since her tragic death,
he still carried fresh flowers to her grave
in bouquets with lilies and baby's breath.
Sorrow engulfed him like a crashing wave.

He still carried fresh flowers to her grave
Their scent reminded him of her perfumes
Sorrow engulfed him like a crashing wave
Her spirit lived in the garden's bright blooms.



June 6th, 2021   ~   Photo #5
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Ibeh Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:28 AM
Such a wonderful Pantoum rhyme , Jenna:-) Your poetry is always on point! Good luck in the contest, my friend.
Logan Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 4:39 AM
Hi, Edward, and thank you so very much for your kind remarks.
Mcintosh Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:06 AM
This is brilliant and breathtaking and brings my soul chills... I love it! Amazing and a sure winner. Love it. God bless you Sweet friend. Love, Gina
Logan Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Thanks so very much for the kindness of your thoughts, Gina. They're appreciated.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 5:14 AM
How wonderful you composed your pantoum even though on a sad note. I can relate to it though. Hugs.
Logan Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 5:33 AM
I'm sorry if it's awakened sad memories for you, Victor. Thank you for another thoughtful visit to my poetry.
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