Joseph May Poet Rhyme

He Spied Her

A spider named Deb was spinning her web
 When along came a spider named Jeb
 Though Deb was twice his size
 Jeb saw love in her eyes
  So Jeb built a web with great skill
 His silky threads gave Deb a thrill

 They both shared a web of romance
 Then one day Jeb saw his chance
 And he moved in for a kiss
 For a moment of bliss
 But poor Jeb had been misled
 Now he's hanging by a thread!

 328-2021
 Nursery Rhyme 3 Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Anisha Dutta April 4, 2021 at 11:25 PM i hate spider and have Arachne phobia. I am scared even on thought of a spider. Best wishes

Alexis Y. April 2, 2021 at 5:27 PM Hi Joseph, What a clever and well-written write. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis April 2, 2021 at 8:58 AM Delightful and dexterous writing, my friend, Joseph! Good luck. Stay safe!

Harry Horsman March 31, 2021 at 10:02 PM So clever Joseph, will prompt loads of questions, i'm sure. Thanks for the great contest, and the placement..H

Joanna Daniel March 31, 2021 at 8:10 PM This is so clever and cute, Joseph:) thank you for my placement in your Tableau contests:)

Juliet Ligon March 31, 2021 at 2:46 PM This is really clever and fun.

Andrea Dietrich March 31, 2021 at 9:18 AM this is REALLY cute!

Heidi Sands March 30, 2021 at 11:38 AM LoL. Oh oh, not so good for Jeb. I agree this is creative Joseph. Well done :)

Brandy Nicole March 29, 2021 at 6:49 PM "Now he's hanging by a thread" Oh my ! That wasn't love in her eyes, she was eying her prize. This is cute, clever and so creative. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Jan Allison March 29, 2021 at 3:08 PM ha ha ha this is such fun Joseph and the title is brilliant:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit March 29, 2021 at 5:45 AM Poor Jeb indeed. Had a laugh!

Victor Buhagiar March 29, 2021 at 12:46 AM Moral of the story: never trust a spider :) Joseph May March 29, 2021 at 4:39 AM Lol, Thank you Victor