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He slammed his heavy door, right in gracious friendships’ face? She cried heavy tears, into a dainty handkerchief of lovely, lilac lace. The silver moon rose in the sky, she heard it whisper, with a cloudy sigh: “God did see that email, and your new, best friend is nigh!!” 1/29/2024

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Date: 2/4/2024 12:09:00 PM
Good riddance to bad rubbish. Stay strong! :)
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Date: 2/4/2024 12:22:00 PM
This was an incident, a while back, its so easy to say cliched, isnt it? But when someone takes a chisel to your heart..it doesnt feel very comforting, does it? Great poetry, plays and novels bear this truth out! Examplle=Romeo amd Juliet Pangie xx
Date: 2/3/2024 3:10:00 PM
The moon carries many secrets - not all are shared - for she has a dark side. This poem could be the start of a novel - a murder mystery perhaps or a love story? - the moon, in her wisdom will decide.. A curious but intriguing poem, dear Pangie! :))
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Date: 2/3/2024 3:30:00 PM
Ah, you creative one, this is simply about a male poet (or more than one) who ended a friendship(s) here by cruelty, and buffoonery.There are women poets who joined them in a destructive poem about me. All but one are stii here. That was the meaning of this.! I am glad you saw more possibilities and not the grief this caused me. However, as you see, I am still here! I do not fold! I am quite indestructible! )) Thank you. Pangie xx
Date: 1/29/2024 7:06:00 PM
A sweet poem that describes a breakup. But perhaps she will find a better one, anyhow. It's sad but a very good poem.
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Date: 1/29/2024 7:45:00 PM
This can happen to anyone,mdont you agree.? I just use she because I am a demale. Sometimes in using any social media site,ourbest friendd just disappozears. My pont was to have faith. God semds us new ones,))) the world iis compsed of billions of people. Some dont like us? Big Whoop!!hugs, Pangie xx
Date: 1/29/2024 5:29:00 PM
goodbye and good riddance is what I say... :-) smiles, Sara
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Date: 1/29/2024 6:22:00 PM
Great psycholgy.Sare! Sometimes its easy not see that G_d pulled people from our life for some reason. BUT replaces them with souls that uplift us. Thats how I finally see it. And why the lst two linesare crucial… May you and sweet Bill be blessed, Pangie with huggs xx
Date: 1/29/2024 3:15:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, They are not worse it. Hugs. /Darlene/xxx
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Date: 1/29/2024 3:53:00 PM
Hello, toyou in Canada! I hope this finds you and sparkles, warm, and healthy. You are right in your evaluation. I agree with you.. Hugs from California. Pangie xx and Irene.
Date: 1/29/2024 2:21:00 PM
You're better off without them whoever they are, they've shown their true colours. Tom
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Date: 1/29/2024 2:47:00 PM
Right you are Tom.! Good riddance to rubbish and cruelty. Who needs pain and angst? Nobody! Pangie xx
Date: 1/29/2024 12:20:00 PM
Hi Dear Pangie, this emotive poem sure says so much about friendship. A misunderstanding, heated words, a disagreement, etc. can injure or kill a friendship. I can relate very much to this stirring verse. Hugs xxooxx
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Date: 1/29/2024 12:58:00 PM
Hi my friend! Yes, things in emails can blow a good frienship to bits….in life as well. Sometimes, not all people are nice!you know that! I do in spades)) the point was the last line. G-d sends a new friend…we forigive and forget the past. God will take care of any Creeps who harm us. I have seen it in action. Pangie xx Thank you.

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