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He Slammed the Door





    He slammed his heavy door, right in gracious 
    friendships’ face?

    She cried heavy tears, into a dainty handkerchief
    of lovely, lilac lace.

    The silver moon rose in the sky, she heard it whisper, 
    with a cloudy sigh:

    “God did see that email, and your new, best friend 
     is nigh!!”

                     1/29/2024

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Linda Alice Fowler

February 4, 2024 at 12:09 PM

Good riddance to bad rubbish. Stay strong! :)

Panagiota Romios

February 4, 2024 at 12:22 PM

This was an incident, a while back, its so easy to say cliched, isnt it? But when someone takes a chisel to your heart..it doesnt feel very comforting, does it? Great poetry, plays and novels bear this truth out! Examplle=Romeo amd Juliet Pangie xx

Christopher Grieves

February 3, 2024 at 3:10 PM

The moon carries many secrets - not all are shared - for she has a dark side. This poem could be the start of a novel - a murder mystery perhaps or a love story? - the moon, in her wisdom will decide.. A curious but intriguing poem, dear Pangie! :))

Panagiota Romios

February 3, 2024 at 3:30 PM

Ah, you creative one, this is simply about a male poet (or more than one) who ended a friendship(s) here by cruelty, and buffoonery.There are women poets who joined them in a destructive poem about me. All but one are stii here. That was the meaning of this.! I am glad you saw more possibilities and not the grief this caused me. However, as you see, I am still here! I do not fold! I am quite indestructible! )) Thank you. Pangie xx

Hilda Greenhough

January 29, 2024 at 7:06 PM

A sweet poem that describes a breakup. But perhaps she will find a better one, anyhow. It's sad but a very good poem.

Panagiota Romios

January 29, 2024 at 7:45 PM

This can happen to anyone,mdont you agree.? I just use she because I am a demale. Sometimes in using any social media site,ourbest friendd just disappozears. My pont was to have faith. God semds us new ones,))) the world iis compsed of billions of people. Some dont like us? Big Whoop!!hugs, Pangie xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 29, 2024 at 3:15 PM

Hello Panagiota, They are not worse it. Hugs. /Darlene/xxx

Panagiota Romios

January 29, 2024 at 3:53 PM

Hello, toyou in Canada! I hope this finds you and sparkles, warm, and healthy. You are right in your evaluation. I agree with you.. Hugs from California. Pangie xx and Irene.

Tom Cunningham

January 29, 2024 at 2:21 PM

You're better off without them whoever they are, they've shown their true colours. Tom

Panagiota Romios

January 29, 2024 at 2:47 PM

Right you are Tom.! Good riddance to rubbish and cruelty. Who needs pain and angst? Nobody! Pangie xx

Regina Elliott

January 29, 2024 at 12:20 PM

Hi Dear Pangie, this emotive poem sure says so much about friendship. A misunderstanding, heated words, a disagreement, etc. can injure or kill a friendship. I can relate very much to this stirring verse. Hugs xxooxx

Panagiota Romios

January 29, 2024 at 12:58 PM

Hi my friend! Yes, things in emails can blow a good frienship to bits….in life as well. Sometimes, not all people are nice!you know that! I do in spades)) the point was the last line. G-d sends a new friend…we forigive and forget the past. God will take care of any Creeps who harm us. I have seen it in action. Pangie xx Thank you.

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