Jun-Jun Villanueva Poet Rhyme

He Sees Me

Blind...with the beauty and symmetry of nature
                          Can't espy the astonishing and sedate scenes of ardor
          Just living with the greatest and blindest darkness
                                Imageless and almost senseless...

          Deaf...with the mellifluous and profound music of amity
                           Can't harken the serene and blithe tune of natural creativity
          Just living with my own nothingness
                            Dumb and almost senseless...

          Mute...can't explode feelings and heartstrings through words and expositions
                                Can't speak and expound my real emotions
          Can't shout out loud,just living with silence - soundless
                                  Dumb and almost senseless...

           Paralyzed...can't accomplish what was desired to achieve
                              Can't act,can't execute,can't move - there's no relieve
           Just living with myself,occupied by loneliness
                               Cripple and now USELESS

            Balked,feeble,depraved,weak - a YOUNG LOOSER
                     But will never SURRENDER
                                  Still BREATHING
                     BELIEVING...
            KNEELING...
   PRAYING...



           ***coz' GOD knows...

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Noel Villarosa June 3, 2011 at 11:14 PM Congratulations for this wonderful piece, appreciate for commenting to my poem. (^_^) Noel.

Wilma Neels June 3, 2011 at 6:43 AM Hey jun-jun congratulations on your awesome win in Pd's contest. Cool to share a placement with you :) hope your weekend will be a great one :) tc

Skat A June 3, 2011 at 5:52 AM congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat

Dr.Ram Mehta June 3, 2011 at 5:51 AM My Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., jun-jun

June 3, 2011 at 5:33 AM congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat

Poet Destroyer A June 2, 2011 at 10:35 PM J.J., another winner... thanks for joing my contest,, take care,..Linda

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 2, 2011 at 12:15 PM Wow, I loved how you ended this, Jun-jun! very inspiring and super congrats on this very uplifting write-- your faith shine through :) --btw hope you don't mind me pointing out-- just a typo in loser-- hope this helps :) enjoy your day! Congrats again & thanks for all your comments :) Jun-Jun Villanueva June 2, 2011 at 6:19 PM sorry for the mistake....ahahaha....d ko nga po un nakita..hahaha.....salamat ng marami

Carol Sunshine Brown June 2, 2011 at 8:52 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol Jun-Jun Villanueva June 2, 2011 at 6:19 PM thank you....well appreciated

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 2, 2011 at 8:35 AM congrats jun-jun on another fantastic win in the inspiration contest with this awesome entry luv..enjoy.. Jun-Jun Villanueva June 2, 2011 at 6:20 PM thank you...well appreciated.....****

Kash Poet June 2, 2011 at 8:12 AM Just Excellent!!Congrats on your win jun-jun.. Jun-Jun Villanueva June 2, 2011 at 6:18 PM thanks a lot...

John Rhinem June 1, 2011 at 10:27 AM Smile ~ Always there ~ Everywhere ~ Everyday ~ Joy to The World ~ Tis All One Needs to Know ~ Tis All One Need They Hold ~ Serenities Mold ~ Excellent In Beauties Verse ~ Fave ~ Love, John!:) ~ Jun-Jun Villanueva June 1, 2011 at 10:32 AM thank you so much..well appreciated... godbless

James Peranteau June 1, 2011 at 7:53 AM And you led this soul to the depths dear poet ! Awesome write ! Perk up dear one, life is a bowl of....what nots...Have a wonderful week,,,, much love, james Jun-Jun Villanueva June 1, 2011 at 10:33 AM thank you...for the compliments...so encouraged to write more.... junjun