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Blind...with the beauty and symmetry of nature Can't espy the astonishing and sedate scenes of ardor Just living with the greatest and blindest darkness Imageless and almost senseless... Deaf...with the mellifluous and profound music of amity Can't harken the serene and blithe tune of natural creativity Just living with my own nothingness Dumb and almost senseless... Mute...can't explode feelings and heartstrings through words and expositions Can't speak and expound my real emotions Can't shout out loud,just living with silence - soundless Dumb and almost senseless... Paralyzed...can't accomplish what was desired to achieve Can't act,can't execute,can't move - there's no relieve Just living with myself,occupied by loneliness Cripple and now USELESS Balked,feeble,depraved,weak - a YOUNG LOOSER But will never SURRENDER Still BREATHING BELIEVING... KNEELING... PRAYING... ***coz' GOD knows...

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Date: 6/3/2011 11:14:00 PM
Congratulations for this wonderful piece, appreciate for commenting to my poem. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:43:00 AM
Hey jun-jun congratulations on your awesome win in Pd's contest. Cool to share a placement with you :) hope your weekend will be a great one :) tc
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Date: 6/3/2011 5:52:00 AM
congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/3/2011 5:51:00 AM
My Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., jun-jun
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Date: 6/3/2011 5:33:00 AM
congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/2/2011 10:35:00 PM
J.J., another winner... thanks for joing my contest,, take care,..Linda
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:15:00 PM
Wow, I loved how you ended this, Jun-jun! very inspiring and super congrats on this very uplifting write-- your faith shine through :) --btw hope you don't mind me pointing out-- just a typo in loser-- hope this helps :) enjoy your day! Congrats again & thanks for all your comments :)
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Jun-Jun Villanueva
Date: 6/2/2011 6:19:00 PM
sorry for the mistake....ahahaha....d ko nga po un nakita..hahaha.....salamat ng marami
Date: 6/2/2011 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Jun-Jun Villanueva
Date: 6/2/2011 6:19:00 PM
thank you....well appreciated
Date: 6/2/2011 8:35:00 AM
congrats jun-jun on another fantastic win in the inspiration contest with this awesome entry luv..enjoy..
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Jun-Jun Villanueva
Date: 6/2/2011 6:20:00 PM
thank you...well appreciated.....****
Date: 6/2/2011 8:12:00 AM
Just Excellent!!Congrats on your win jun-jun..
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Jun-Jun Villanueva
Date: 6/2/2011 6:18:00 PM
thanks a lot...
Date: 6/1/2011 10:27:00 AM
Smile ~ Always there ~ Everywhere ~ Everyday ~ Joy to The World ~ Tis All One Needs to Know ~ Tis All One Need They Hold ~ Serenities Mold ~ Excellent In Beauties Verse ~ Fave ~ Love, John!:) ~
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Jun-Jun Villanueva
Date: 6/1/2011 10:32:00 AM
thank you so much..well appreciated... godbless
Date: 6/1/2011 7:53:00 AM
And you led this soul to the depths dear poet ! Awesome write ! Perk up dear one, life is a bowl of....what nots...Have a wonderful week,,,, much love, james
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Jun-Jun Villanueva
Date: 6/1/2011 10:33:00 AM
thank you...for the compliments...so encouraged to write more.... junjun

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