He Sees In Stars

He walks by day the northern woods
He seeks by night the skies
He sees in stars a face he knows
And one he knows no more

He plumbs with vague suspicion
The abyss of his soul
And calculates the irony
Of what he does not know 

He is at war, he is at peace
He is beyond the pale
A portrait of a modern man
At manhood’s tender age
Who knows of no restrictions
Nor limits understood
Yet knows the truths that must be told
To beggars, and the proud –

Accommodating challenges
Summoned from within
He looks beyond the you and me
For where he wants to be

And walks by day the northern woods
And seeks by night the skies
To find in stars a man he knows
And one he knows no more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 6/14/2023 3:02:00 PM
Full of loneliness and longing... I liked your write!
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John Oldham
Date: 6/15/2023 6:55:00 AM
Thanks, Paige.
Date: 4/22/2023 10:55:00 AM
This is a little sad to me John. What once was still is, if only in memory. Chasing dreams is what life is all about:) hoping you are well my friend.
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John Oldham
Date: 4/23/2023 4:46:00 AM
Hey Daniel, thanks for your response. Sad, perhaps. For me it’s more introspective and meditative. Intended to convey a feeling of self discovery during an age of transition. Hope you are well too! Best, John.
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