He Says - She Says

He says. "Never say, I can't." 

    "Why on Earth not meet defeat
     admit you're seldom right.
     Saying you CAN is vanity
     and looking for a fight."

He says. "Don't look back on failure ..."

"Dwell on failure is what I say
 thank failure with a smile!
 A learning tool is what it is
 to shorten your next mile."

"Good results are scant." He says.

     "Oh goodness," she says. "Where are you looking?"
     Don't you breathe the air with roses blooming
     and eat your fine wife's lucious cooking."
     "Taste life's gifts," she says. "Don't focus on doom."

He says. "But, praise is less than complaint!"

 "Enjoy the ACTION she says, not the "at-a-boy!'
  it is YOU who decides what's of value to YOU
  and how to feel about every judgment deployed.
 Your opinion of self is what you should pursue."

"Embrace the TRUTH with stoic composure." He says.

     "The truth...which truth is that?"
     "Laugh," I say, "in the face of those
     to those opposed, tip your hat.
     Revealations comes with growth!

He says. "Be rawhide tough and BULLDOG mean."

 "Oh God, what men don't do?
  Be sweet, be soft be kind I say
  and like returns to you
  for your soul you've not betrayed."

"Defeat," he says, "has no place in your repertoire ..."

Now here, she says, "it's not defeat to wish upon a star...."


Poets: Charles Henderson & Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 2:20 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Opposites Attract" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 6:27 PM
what a great idea you both came up with. Men truly are MARTIANS. haha. Debs, you could maybe enter this in Franks' contest as well!! Congrats to you. Luv, Andrea
Susan Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 5:20 PM
good collaboration. loved the ending! congratulations on your win :)
K. Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 2:23 PM
What a very uniquely written poem, Debbie & Charles! I really liked how you tackled this, very cool how you did the "he says, she says" part :) and just me, heehee, I love how the woman has the last word (ummm line) here ;) loved the ending-- so true! Congrats to you and Charles! :)
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 2:58 PM
yeah..LOL, Charles is a Gentleman HE LET ME have the last word!
Onclaud Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 12:29 PM
a duo on a highly charming poetic climb... congrats deb and charles! :) huggs
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 10:55 AM
Congratulations on your joint win x
Sweetheart Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 9:21 AM
CONGRATS DEBBIE ON A FABULOUS WIN WITH CHARLES .. A MESMERIZING ENTRY LUV..
Williams Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 8:47 AM
Debbie and Charles congrats on your win..David
Maverick Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 11:17 PM
A write full of thought and emotion i see here from two talented pens,, ( enjoyed reading )
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 12:27 PM
And I say........you two rock the soup today. If this is for Tracie's contest it is a top spotter in my book. Thank you Charles and Debbie for sharing. Love, Carol
Fiery Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 9:52 AM
MARVELLOUS COLLAB...I LOVED THE TITLE TOO..HE SAys ..she says...the last line was as powerful as the rest of the poem... it's not defeat to wish upon a star...brilliant
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