He Says I Ask Him

I remember it well
As I can tell
He says I ask him to marry me
But nay I say
It was he that ask me
We were crossing hiway 43
When we reach the middle he turned to and said but you didn't answer
I replied I was afraid if I gave the wrong answer you just might wreck
Then I would have to break your neck
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 1:30 PM
:-). Congratulations on your win Patricia.
Bernard Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 4:42 PM
Thanks Brenda for reading ......Tricia
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 6:13 AM
- Patricia, congrats with your winning poem - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bernard Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 4:43 PM
Thank you Anne for reading my true memory;-)....Tricia
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 6:02 AM
I appreciate the humor in the write, Patricia. congrats on the win
Bernard Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram I appreciate you taking the time to read it mean alot to me.....Tricia
Yaseen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 4:29 AM
Congrats for your win patrica,,, Hugs
Bernard Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 9:37 PM
Thank you for reading my true memory;)......Tricia
Konos Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
Bernard Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 4:48 PM
Thank you Judy for having this contest I enjoyed the "walk" down memory lane it has been 29 years sense I had the chance to do that......;-).....Tricia
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:46 AM
love the humour here Patricia many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
Allison Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 4:53 PM
keep posting and I'll keep reading:-) hugs jan xxx
Bernard Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 4:51 PM
Thanks Jan I am glad you took the time to read it does mean a lot to me it is people like you and Brenda, Dr. Ram and all the others that keep me doing this because it is hard to do but I love it and it helps my brain;-).....Tricia
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