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He Sat Upon My Window Sill

He sat upon my windowsill His eyes twinkling in the night He gazed inside and looked at me His smile burning bright I opened up the window for him. And he jumped right down He landed on his toes As he slowly looked around He winked at me as if to say, "It was nice to meet you" And as he stepped into the night I knew those words were true I enjoyed his company although I never knew That he was not a normal man like you and I would know But a frisky cat that sat outside And let his orange eyes glow.

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Daver Austin

Date: 3/29/2016 2:45:00 PM

Yep, the purr can and the eyes visit though outside. A very mystic little opus, dear Dreemurr. Congrats. daver

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2016 12:31:00 PM

- Thank you for your first poem, Kya :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:39:00 AM

Kya Dreemurr, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2016 9:55:00 PM

Hi, Kya, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@