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He said, "Hello and just who might you be?" She said, "I might be me,so are you free?" It was such an electrifying attraction It demanded immediate mutual reaction He said, "I could love you with all my heart" She said, "I felt the same way from the start" All anyone could want and then some, some would say With all they had so sad greed got in the way He said a harsh word here and she said one there She said it's not perfect, He said so why care? Not the true romance they thought it should be They searched for more and set each other free She said years later, "He's the one that got away." He said I remember when, when he passed that same day!

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Date: 10/5/2017 6:55:00 AM
sounds like a country song.. Well written Pat..
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Pat Adams
Date: 10/5/2017 8:07:00 AM
Thank you kind sir. You're right it doe's sound like a country song! Silent and yet astute! Admiral qualities indeed!!
Date: 10/4/2017 8:09:00 PM
I think many people can relate to this nice write about "the one who got away" Pat!~Che :)
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Date: 10/4/2017 10:02:00 PM
Thanks Cheryl. Sometimes things just weren't meant to be I think.............80)......Pat

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