He Rises

The doors of Hades opens Upon the earth he'll crawl, the Serpent is rising http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-15.php
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Eggins Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 5:45 AM
shivers .... cause you maybe right on one level ... environmentally love Jayne
Trevino Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 11:05 AM
Surpent is rising,?, i got the chills lol, =(^.^)=Royal
Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 6:20 AM
He is here among us doing his dirty work and it is going to get worse when he enters a man who will do his bidding...Great write that you have penned in this one...Thanks for explaining the other poem about the person that did the killing... Who could have prompted him to do such a thing??? ....It was not a loving God....Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 6:13 AM
The serpent lays in wait outside "the doors of Hades." A frightening image in your excellent senryu, James! Love, Caroln
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 3:45 PM
The serpent is always there,we have to be wise enough,when he approaches,love your style in senryu!Celene.
Mckenzie Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 3:35 PM
Very interesting poem! Laura :)
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