He Rises

The doors of Hades opens Upon the earth he'll crawl, the Serpent is rising http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-15.php

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Jayne Eggins

Date: 6/6/2010 5:45:00 AM

shivers .... cause you maybe right on one level ... environmentally love Jayne

Royal Trevino

Date: 6/5/2010 11:05:00 AM

Surpent is rising,?, i got the chills lol, =(^.^)=Royal

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2010 6:20:00 AM

He is here among us doing his dirty work and it is going to get worse when he enters a man who will do his bidding...Great write that you have penned in this one...Thanks for explaining the other poem about the person that did the killing... Who could have prompted him to do such a thing??? ....It was not a loving God....Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/5/2010 6:13:00 AM

The serpent lays in wait outside "the doors of Hades." A frightening image in your excellent senryu, James! Love, Caroln

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/4/2010 3:45:00 PM

The serpent is always there,we have to be wise enough,when he approaches,love your style in senryu!Celene.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 6/4/2010 3:35:00 PM

Very interesting poem! Laura :)