He Quivers In Beats

I soak in his wheezed language drenching my breath ,as twilight rips the lining of my skin; a massive fire slowly rolling upon our chests… as the lion in him kneads a melodious rambling that the climbing heat, the serenade of minstrel’s tunes gushes on this day through a café’s view. Then once, twice, thrice with gentle stutter of outstretched whispers--- through the lure of a need humming---he could not speak clearly beyond the gardens. In a flash, like a hungry soul let loose, my steady mate quivers in beats as the singer drones ' The Way You Look Tonight.' “ Will you carry my name and be this guy's lifetime bride?” Secretly, the potion of my craving finally explodes! Sounds of The Day Contest For Nayda Ivette Negron Resubmitted 6/20/2016
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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Nette
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 6:54 AM
- Nette, congrats with your winning poem - A wonderful 1st place !!! - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 5:32 AM
A spectacular write, nette, congrats on the win
Mcintosh Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:24 AM
I love this... Thank you. Love and prayers, Gina
Konos Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:06 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 10:43 AM
And back again wid huge congrats Nette on this top winning magnificent write !
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 9:48 AM
Congratulations on your number 1 win. This is one of my favorites.
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:18 AM
spectacular write Nette many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xxx
Mcdaid Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 11:53 AM
very beautifully penned excellent piece
Ryerson Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 12:06 AM
I-I um (gulp) Well I-uh---Whew! From: Slim-I-mean-Jim-I---Good stuff here Bette-I-mean-Let...
Kearley Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 5:20 PM
Such a loving serenade... :o) Beautiful!
Yvonne Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 3:01 PM
Wow you had me on the edge of my seat. I thought he was never going to ask. What an excellent poem. This will do well.
Sabre Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:46 PM
Gotta admit, we guys get scared popping the question. This tremendous poem speaks of real anticipation and joy of forthcoming lifetime commitment. A favorite from a genius.
Parker Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:46 PM
only one with immense passion can write this way..there are many who talk about passion many who dream about passion but passion is something from deep within that you either have or don't..and my poetic friend this poem is drenched in passion..I smile..good luck in the contest
Smith Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Simply spectacular nette...any girls dream...hugs Tim
Austin Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:21 PM
A proposal to that old minstrel tune, "The way you look tonight." Got a kick out of this one, nette. Love, daver
A. Sharma Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 11:22 AM
Superb passionate write Nette! Sure will fly high! Best wishes!
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