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He Packed a Pistol

Joe Doakes packed a pistol for protection Tucked away in his pants, 'scaped detection -- Had a girl named Meg Who flashed him some leg -- Joe's pistol turned into an e-rec-tion

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/13/2019 7:05:00 PM

Very creative, Gershon. What a mind you have. Panagiota

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/14/2019 9:14:00 PM

Thank you for the compliment --- even if that 'mind' occasionally dips into the gutter. (Limericks are historically off-color, so...). :) gw

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/12/2019 8:49:00 PM

Hello Gershon … yes; certainly a surprise for the young lady - or was it? Thank you Gershon - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/12/2019 9:29:00 PM

Now you can see why all the women want gun control in America!! LOL. Cheerio! ~ gw

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 9/11/2019 7:55:00 PM

Gershon, I love great lims and this is a GREAT one! Anxious to read more of them from your very prolific and witty quill - Bob

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2019 8:28:00 PM

Oh! I see that you had to figure out the last word for yourself... I imagine that you got it. After I submit this reply, I'm going to divide the word with a hyphen; that'll get it past the censor! … Thank you so much for your enthusiastic response to this lim, Bob. I'll do my best to keep them up. (Pun intended). Best wishes, gw