He Noticed
Saw a friend yesterday, hadn't seen for a year
Marveled at my weight loss, grinned from ear to ear
What was my secret he wanted to know
Told him I eat less, it's easier as you go
Proud that he noticed, so worth it that's clear
Copyright © Jack Ellison | Year Posted 2018
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