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He needs to come to the waters more

My word: loyal It's him again, he can be such a pain: he's always asking for my aid to undo all mistakes he's made (with all the voices that I hear, each day, each month, each year!) Although he's meaning well and yes, with lots to tell, he can be such a pain. It's him again... for Sara's contest

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Date: 7/30/2025 3:28:00 PM
This has a clever, almost whimsical rhythm—like a lighthearted lament with deeper emotional weight underneath. The repetition of “It’s him again” adds a relatable touch of exasperation, while the word “loyal” quietly threads through the speaker’s devotion. Nicely done!
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