He needs to come to the waters more

My word: loyal

It's him again,
he can be such a pain:
he's always asking for my aid
to undo all mistakes he's made
(with all the voices that I hear,
each day, each month, each year!)
Although he's meaning well
and yes, with lots to tell,
he can be such a pain. 
It's him again...

for Sara's contest

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Date: 8/25/2025 1:55:00 PM
Thank you for entering your poetic winning work in my contest. I appreciate you supporting my contest efforts. Congratulations on your winner. Sara K
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Date: 7/30/2025 3:28:00 PM
This has a clever, almost whimsical rhythm—like a lighthearted lament with deeper emotional weight underneath. The repetition of “It’s him again” adds a relatable touch of exasperation, while the word “loyal” quietly threads through the speaker’s devotion. Nicely done!
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